Monday, 7 April 2014


I really love to write poetry it just does something for me, it calms me and thinking of rhymes can entertain me for a really long time. I had an english project on poetry recently an i just thought i would share some of my workings with you guys. :)

My Metaphor Poem
The sensations grip me
They strangle me
The ceiling drops over and over
Running from instinct
The road keeps going never stopping
Sharp or dull the demon doesn't mind
Marmite nerves
Black and cold
Loved and hated
My stomach is a river
My head is a dam
My joints seared into place
The drug is late
Saved by a tin packet
Killed by a clock
No utopia 

My Sonnet (1)
He stared at down me 
He whispered a single word
Handed me a key
My reason slurred
My heart beat on and on 
The strong loud pounding drum
I stood all surprise forgone
Unable to move almost numb
The key began to fade
His emotions began to wane
This cut me like a blade
Though no physical pain
I fell to my knees ashes in hand
You fell though me like sand  

Sonnet (2)
Bullets pound my head as I fall
Words curse me as I kneel
I hear a loud violent call
Pain pierces me I try to conceal
remember our happy times
The walks the sights the love
I think back sometimes
As I look upon heaven above
The love has now diminished
Its gone with the easterly wind
The past now relinquished
I watched as you grinned
The thoughts I once shared with you have now been discarded
We had a game and you cheated

My Acrostic (Sherlock)
Sociopath is he mind his wrath
Hope is not forgotten he is your rope
Elegant as ever piecing together crimes so intelligent
Righteous he is not be cautious
Loving is his centre his exterior stunning
Obedience is not his allegiance
Clever and cunning such as a fox could never be
Kick and punch pain you cannot inflict 

Hope you enjoyed reading my terrible poetry :)



  1. Great post, dear)

  2. Cute poems :)